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describe below process of oil supplies.

describe below process of oil supplies. Knj2M

we use energy for three main things: electricity production, heating, and transport. For the first two, we have (state verb) options such as solar and wind power, or natural gas. But oil is still the world's number one source of energy, and for transport at least, three is currently no alternative. In China, domestic energy consumption is going up (year by year tells us this is a gradual change over time) year by year, and demand in similar regions is catching up fast. we know how to use energy more efficiently now than in the past but the worldwide rise in demand is causing cornermen amongst experts. some experts think that oil supplies will start to fall within the next twenty years. More experts agree that we need to find a new source of energy.

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energy
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energy
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now
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some
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start
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agree
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energy
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