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Describe an old friend you got in contact with again

Describe an old friend you got in contact with again aV3r7
Nowadays people really busy to do their work load and they cannot manage their life between work and social also so they have not had time to met their old friends which is really a good moment for them but unfortunately they have no time to met with the someone but here I would like to chance when I I met with my all friend her name is in the preferred girl I met her when I was in 12th standard that time I met her in school days and she became my best friend that time and I cannot imagine my life without her friendship but unfortunately I decided to to to admission in SD college barnala and I started here to BSc medical but in contrast my friend decided to take admission in MBA because she have that knowledge about the humanities subject so she choose their course according to their interest in addition to these I cannot met again and I really felt bad but one such chance when my mother uh invited her on my birthday party and it was a surprise for me and it's a really good chance to make her again when I saw in the please try again in front of my eyes I can't believe my eyes that time and I really felt happy as it was a situation when I met again of my one of the closest friend in the physical girl and I can share my all problems and difficulties to the mobile phone button that time I showers or situation face to face it's really a good experience for me so this was a time when I met my friend again and I really wanted to again on that uses in the month of July I really interested to to go in the house.
Nowadays
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the someone
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here I would like to chance when
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I I
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with my all
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her name is in the preferred girl I
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her when I was in 12th standard that
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I
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her in school
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days and
she became my best
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that
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barnala
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medical
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decided to take admission in MBA
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she
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have
that knowledge about the humanities subject
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she
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choose
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chance to
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her
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felt happy as it was a situation when I
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of my one of the closest
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friend
in the physical girl and I can share my all problems and difficulties to the mobile phone button that
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time
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I showers
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experience for me
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interested
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IELTS essay Describe an old friend you got in contact with again

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
307 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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