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Describe an occasion when you received many visitors at your home

Describe an occasion when you received many visitors at your home rGVWo
i had a get together at home. most of the relative and friends come there. I had to greet and serve them food and offering drinks. After long time we meet to each other. We share our day to day happenings. Crack jokes, and talk about social issues. We did lots of arrangements. we buy clothes and footwear for this party. cook makes delicious food including sweets and spicy. Near about 100 people come there to attend this party.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
had a
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get
together at home.
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most
of the relative and friends
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come
there. I had to greet and serve them food and offering drinks.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
long time we
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meet
to each other. We share our
It appears that two hyphens are missing.
day to day
happenings. Crack jokes, and talk about social issues. We did lots of arrangements.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
we
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buy
clothes and footwear for this party.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
cook
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makes
delicious food including sweets and spicy. Near about 100
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
there to attend this party.
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IELTS essay Describe an occasion when you received many visitors at your home

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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