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Describe an object in your home that you love

Describe an object in your home that you love Ark1e
My father is an art lover, so I have a lot of art objects in my house. It's one of the souvenirs my dad bought on a business trip in China. it is a water bottle, it has a beautiful appearance, so my father used it as a decoration in the living room. The pitcher consists of a body about 30cm high with a diameter of 15cm and an arc-shaped handle. It is made of glass with jade green color. My dad doesn't remember how much he bought it for but it looks expensive. It had embossed patterns which my father said were old Chinese patterns. I think anyone who sees it will find it very beautiful and outstanding. Everyone who comes to my house notices it first. I love it very much because it is a gift that my dad bought, i think it will be something in my family for a long time.
My father is an art lover,
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I have
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a lot of
art objects in my
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house
. It's one of the souvenirs my dad
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bought
on a business trip in China.
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it
is a water bottle, it has a
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beautiful
appearance,
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so
my father
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used
it as a decoration in the living room. The pitcher consists of a body about
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30cm
high with a diameter of
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15cm
and an arc-shaped handle. It
is made
of glass with jade green color. My dad doesn't remember how much he
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bought
it for
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but
it looks expensive. It had embossed patterns which my father said were
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old
Chinese patterns. I
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think
anyone who
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sees
it will find it
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very
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beautiful
and outstanding. Everyone who
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comes
to my
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house
notices it
first
. I
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love
it
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very
much
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because
it is a gift that my dad
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bought
,
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i
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think
it will be something in my family for a long time.

IELTS essay Describe an object in your home that you love

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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