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Describe an object in your home that you love

Describe an object in your home that you love Ark1e
My father is an art lover, so I have a lot of art objects in my house. It's one of the souvenirs my dad bought on a business trip in China. it is a water bottle, it has a beautiful appearance, so my father used it as a decoration in the living room. The pitcher consists of a body about 30cm high with a diameter of 15cm and an arc-shaped handle. It is made of glass with jade green color. My dad doesn't remember how much he bought it for but it looks expensive. It had embossed patterns which my father said were old Chinese patterns. I think anyone who sees it will find it very beautiful and outstanding. Everyone who comes to my house notices it first. I love it very much because it is a gift that my dad bought, i think it will be something in my family for a long time.
My father is an art lover,
so
I have
a lot of
art objects in my
house
. It's one of the souvenirs my dad
bought
on a business trip in China.
it
is a water bottle, it has a
beautiful
appearance,
so
my father
used
it as a decoration in the living room. The pitcher consists of a body about
30cm
high with a diameter of
15cm
and an arc-shaped handle. It
is made
of glass with jade green color. My dad doesn't remember how much he
bought
it for
but
it looks expensive. It had embossed patterns which my father said were
old
Chinese patterns. I
think
anyone who
sees
it will find it
very
beautiful
and outstanding. Everyone who
comes
to my
house
notices it
first
. I
love
it
very
much
because
it is a gift that my dad
bought
,
i
think
it will be something in my family for a long time.
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IELTS essay Describe an object in your home that you love

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  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
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