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an effect of cellphones on drivers

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Cellular phones can be a threat to safety. 2 A recent study was done by Donald Redelmeier and Robert Tibshirani of the University of Toronto on effects of cellular phones on drivers. 3 The study showed that cellular phones pose a risk to drivers. 4 In fact, when people talk on the phone while driving. 5 They are four times more likely to have an automobile accident than those who do not use the phone while driving. 6 The Toronto researchers studied 699 drivers, they had been in automobile accidents. 7 At the time of accidents, they were using their cellular phones. 8 The researchers conlcuded. 9 The main reason for the accidents was not that people used on hand for the telephone and only one for driving. 10 Rather, the cause of the accidents was usually that the drivers became distracted, angry or upset by the phone call. 11 The drivers lost concentration. 12 They were more prone to a car accident.
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while driving. 5 They are four times more likely to have an automobile
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while driving. 6 The Toronto researchers studied 699
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, they were using their
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. 8 The researchers
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became distracted, angry or upset by the
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lost concentration. 12 They were more prone to a car
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IELTS essay an effect of cellphones on drivers

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  American English
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163 words
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