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describe an item of technology you had that is very important

describe an item of technology you had that is very important 7PaBn

I have different types of modern technology and electronic gadgets that I use often. Among them, I would like to talk about an electronic gadgets that is important to me which is my laptop for this topic. This is a laptop of the famous brand HP. Although it was a bit expensive for me, my mother bought it for me for my birthday. I use my laptop for studying on weekdays, but I also watch movies, listen to music, surf the web and play computer games on it in my spare time. In fact, I use this laptop more often than any other electronic gadgets I have except a smartphone. This computer is very important to me because it helps me study, helps me find and discover information that I do not know, and this is also a meaningful gift that my mother gave me.

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