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Describe an item of modern technology that is most important to you?

Describe an item of modern technology that is most important to you? 7WYjA

My laptop is the most important digital appliance in my home. I have had a laptop for years, but I have recently upgraded my computer. I am computer literate. I study from home and I need Internet access to do my research. Advances in technology have also made it possible for me to work from home. I surf the web in search of freelance opportunities. In my leisure time, I download books and music from the Internet. I pay for these via Electronic Funds Transfer. I do not condone online piracy, as I value the arts and believe that the authors and songwriters should be rewarded for their work. I use social media networks to keep up with my friends and family across the globe and I also shop online from time to time.

My laptop is the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 digital appliance in my home. I have had a laptop for years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I have recently upgraded my computer.

I am This word is normally spelled with hyphen.computer-literate
computer literate
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 study from home and I need Internet access to do my research.

Advances in technology have also
 made it possible for me to work from home.

I surf the web in search of freelance opportunities.

In my leisure time, I download books and music from the Internet. I pay for these via Electronic Funds Transfer. I do not condone online piracy, as I value the arts and believe that the authors and songwriters should be rewarded
 for their work.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 social media networks to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 up with my friends and family across the globe and I also
 shop online from time to time. 