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Describe an idea you had for improving something at work or collegeYou should say: When and where you had your ideaWhat your idea wasWho you told you about your ideaAnd explain why you thought your idea would make an improvement v.1

Describe an idea you had for improving something at work or collegeYou should say: When and where you had your ideaWhat your idea wasWho you told you about your ideaAnd explain why you thought your idea would make an improvement v. 1
In recent years, the approach of using exams to assess students has risen in popularity over the alternative of continual assessment. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such an approach. To begin with the positives, a crucial advantage that examinations have as a form of assessment is that they leave little room for cheating. This is because exams are usually undertaken in the presence of an invigilator, whose job it is to detect any candidate breaking the rules. In contrast, continual assessment increases the risk of plagiarism since assignments are often completed with the help of the internet. Besides reducing cheating, exams are also more time-efficient. As they tend to only appear once or twice per year, they free up more time for students to revise and prepare. Nevertheless, assessing students via examinations does present some problems. For instance, some students are extremely intelligent and creative, but when put under pressure, their minds can go blank. Considering that exams are situations of intense high pressure, it is no wonder that even the brightest of students sometimes perform poorly. Another significant disadvantage of this system is the narrow range of information which students are tested on. Unlike with continual assessment, the small window of time in tests limits how many questions can be asked, thus failing to test students’ knowledge in full. In conclusion, although formal examinations are beneficial in terms of cutting out cheating and improving efficiency, it is important to consider that they also harm some students’ concentration and are arguably not as thorough as continual assessments.
In recent years, the approach of using exams to assess
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students
has risen in popularity over the alternative of
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continual
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assessment
. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such an approach.

To
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begin
with the positives, a crucial advantage that examinations have as a form of
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assessment
is that they
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leave
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little
room for cheating. This is
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because
exams are
usually
undertaken in the presence of an invigilator, whose job it is to detect any candidate breaking the
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rules
.
In contrast
,
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continual
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assessment
increases the
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risk
of plagiarism since assignments are
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often
completed with the
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help
of the internet.
Besides
reducing cheating, exams are
also
more time-efficient. As they tend to
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only
appear once or twice per year, they free up more time for
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students
to revise and prepare.

Nevertheless
, assessing
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students
via examinations does present
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some
problems.
For instance
,
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some
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students
are
extremely
intelligent and creative,
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but
when put under pressure, their minds can go blank. Considering that exams are situations of intense high pressure, it is no wonder that even the brightest of
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students
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sometimes
perform
poorly
. Another significant disadvantage of this system is the narrow range of information which
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students
are
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tested
on. Unlike with
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continual
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assessment
, the
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small
window of time in
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tests
limits how
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many
questions can
be asked
,
thus
failing to
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test
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students’
knowledge in full.

In conclusion
, although formal examinations are beneficial in terms of cutting out cheating and improving efficiency, it is
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important
to consider that they
also
harm
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some
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students’
concentration and are
arguably
not as thorough as
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continual
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assessments
.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Describe an idea you had for improving something at work or collegeYou should say: When and where you had your ideaWhat your idea wasWho you told you about your ideaAnd explain why you thought your idea would make an improvement v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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