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Describe an environmental problem that has occurred in your country.

Describe an environmental problem that has occurred in your country. BJPlX
Philippines is surrounded by water and forest. One top environmental problem is illegal logging. Humankind they don't stop cutting trees in the forest. However, due to this issue our country facing global warming. Our state encountered 10 minimum typhoons and for to five intense typhoon in a year. A number of communities or regions are affected of flood. Lost home, source of income, infrastructures and love one. In addition to, last 2009 our nation encountered two strongest typhoon it is Ondoy and Pepeng that severely affected over nine millions of human being, resulted in the loss of thousand lives and a number of missing persons. Authorities must do actions how to stop illegal logging for the safety of sovereign state. By conducting awareness to educate the community how to protect the Mother Earth, planting tress, and using steel instead of woods. Nevertheless, global warming is made by the humans.
Philippines
is surrounded
by water and forest. One top environmental problem is illegal logging. Humankind they don't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
cutting trees in the forest.
However
, due to this issue our country facing global warming. Our state encountered 10 minimum typhoons and for to five intense
Possible agreement error. The noun 'typhoon' seems to be countable, so consider using: "typhoons".
typhoon
in a year. A number of communities or regions are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
of flood. Lost home, source of income, infrastructures and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
one.

In addition
to, last 2009 our nation encountered two strongest
Possible agreement error. The noun 'typhoon' seems to be countable, so consider using: "typhoons".
typhoon
it is
Possible spelling mistake found.
Ondoy
and
Possible spelling mistake found.
Pepeng
that
severely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
over
Use a singular form of the numeral here: "nine million".
nine millions of
human being, resulted in the loss of thousand
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
and a number of missing persons.

Authorities
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
do actions how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
illegal logging for the safety of sovereign state. By conducting awareness to educate the community how to protect the Mother Earth, planting tress, and using steel
instead
of woods.
Nevertheless
, global warming
is made
by the humans.
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IELTS essay Describe an environmental problem that has occurred in your country.

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