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Describe an enjoyable event that you experienced when you were at school

Describe an enjoyable event that you experienced when you were at school nEPqe
The enjoyable moment at school, to everyone school days, is considered as the best days of their life. That day is not forgotten lifetime. They remember the memories for the rest of their life. I also have numerous memories of my school days and I really miss that day very much who fully enjoyable days with friends. Mostly that day when I got caught for school bunking. Recently I have passed my college. Now I am waiting for University admission. I am continuing my study at the University When I sit for studying the University admission materials, But My past days appear before my eyes. I start missing the days When I was twelve and thirteen year age not more than fourteen. There were some other students with me. We had formed a group. All of the group members used to occupy the last benches. Thus we were named as the “backbencher. ” Our class teachers call to backbencher students.
The enjoyable moment at
school
, to everyone
school
days,
is considered
as the best days of their life. That day is not forgotten lifetime. They remember the memories for the rest of their life. I
also
have numerous memories of my
school
days and I
really
miss that day
very
much who
fully
enjoyable days with friends.
Mostly
that day when I
got
caught for
school
bunking. Recently I have passed my college.
Now
I am waiting for University admission. I am continuing my study at the University When I sit for studying the University admission materials,

But
My past days appear
before
my eyes. I
start
missing the days When I was twelve and thirteen year age not more than fourteen. There were
some
other students with me. We had formed a group.
All of the
group members
used
to occupy the last benches.
Thus
we
were named
as the “
backbencher
. ” Our
class
teachers call to
backbencher
students.
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IELTS essay Describe an enjoyable event that you experienced when you were at school

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
160 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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