Describe an activity you tried and enjoyed recently. Explain why it was enjoyable to you. Include reasons and example to support your response. v.1
Describe an activity you tried and enjoyed recently. Explain why it was enjoyable to you. Include reasons and example to support your response. v. 1
Nowadays, in some countries, the population of the younger is more than the elders and this situation has both its ins and outs. On the positive side the society has more work enforcement, but, on the negative side, you may face a lack of experience in some specific jobs.
On the one hand, one of the advantages of this phenomenon is that the job market is more active with better job offers, because of the number of people who can work. For example, if you take a close look at the Indian startups, you can find that because of their society and the massive young population that they have, the officials establish a productive way for them to use their energy in an efficient way. So, it would be a great thing if society’s population belongs to young people and by making good decisions it could be a turning point for the country.
On the other hand, one of the disadvantages that could be happening due to the fact of the young population is that the government has more duties to provide the essential needs for this group. Besides that, they have a different perspective in comparison with the older, for instance, the government have the responsibility to ease the marriage conditions, also, provide hobbies like sport facilities, amusement park and these kinds of things. So, these kinds of the population should be provided with more operators, to fulfil their needs.
In conclusion, although the young society gives more chance for improving the economy, the officials have more responsibility for creating places for them to release their energy.
Nowadays, in
some
countries, the
population
of the younger is more than the elders and this situation has both its ins and outs. On the
positive
side the
society
has more work enforcement,
but
, on the
negative
side, you may face a lack of experience in
some
specific jobs.
On the one hand, one of the advantages of this phenomenon is that the job market is more active with better job offers,
because
of the number of
people
who can work.
For example
, if you take a close look at the Indian startups, you can find that
because
of their
society
and the massive
young
population
that they have, the officials establish a productive way for them to
use
their energy
in an efficient way
.
So
, it would be a great thing if
society’s
population
belongs to
young
people
and by making
good
decisions it could be a turning point for the country.
On the other hand
, one of the disadvantages that could be happening due to the fact of the
young
population
is that the
government
has more duties to provide the essential needs for this group.
Besides
that, they have a
different
perspective
in comparison
with the older,
for instance
, the
government
have the responsibility to
ease
the marriage conditions,
also
, provide hobbies like sport facilities, amusement park and these kinds of things.
So
, these kinds of the
population
should
be provided
with more operators, to fulfil their needs.
In conclusion
, although the
young
society
gives more chance for improving the economy, the officials have more responsibility for creating places for them to release their energy.
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