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Chant in PoetryChant is the rhythmic speaking or signing of words or sounds, often primarily on one or two pitches called reciting tones. It is one or the features that affect greatly in poetry. There are two ways that a chant is formed in poetry. A chant v.1

Chant in PoetryChant is the rhythmic speaking or signing of words or sounds, often primarily on one or two pitches called reciting tones. It is one or the features that affect greatly in poetry. There are two ways that a chant is formed in poetry. A chant v. 1
Nowadays, stationary lifestyle is becoming more and more popular in spite of the remarkable number of sport facilities. This essay will illustrate the most important problem obesity caused by that and awareness of this issue as a solution. Obesity can be noted doubtlessly as the biggest problem of this epidemic. Motionless is the main reason of gaining weight due to the fact that people’s bodies burn calories when they move or do any activity helpful to lose weight. Thereby, getting more calories more than needed in a day without burning at the same time causes obesity after a while. Although plenty of gyms are found in cities to make a human fitter by doing exercises and prevent obesity-related diseases, there is no significant number of people enrolling in these facilities. To prevent these troubles, firstly it is needed to teach people in the community to be aware of this problem and then to encourage them to go to the gym. In other words, everybody just does their routine works and wants to rest in their remaining time rather than going to sport facilities or doing exercises owing to the fact that awareness of obesity or getting weight does not be mentioned via TV programmes or Ads by authorities. If the government started a campaign around the country and encouraged community to do exercises in a facility, it would be a more fascinating activity and people could tend to enrol more in sports activities. In conclusion, obesity a result of sedentary lifestyle is a serious problem and it can be prevented by raising awareness on how it is important to do exercises to solve this issue.
Nowadays, stationary lifestyle is becoming more and more popular
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in spite of
the remarkable number of sport facilities. This essay will illustrate the most
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important
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problem
obesity caused by that and awareness of this issue as a solution.

Obesity can
be noted
doubtlessly
as the biggest
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problem
of this epidemic. Motionless is the main reason of gaining weight due to the fact that
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people’s
bodies burn calories when they
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move
or do any activity helpful to lose weight. Thereby, getting more calories more than needed in a day without burning at the same time causes obesity after a while. Although
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plenty
of gyms
are found
in cities to
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make
a human fitter by doing
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exercises
and
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prevent
obesity-related diseases, there is no significant number of
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people
enrolling in these facilities.

To
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prevent
these troubles,
firstly
it
is needed
to teach
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people
in the community to be aware of this
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problem
and then to encourage them to go to the gym.
In other words
, everybody
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just
does their routine works and wants to rest in their remaining time
rather
than going to sport facilities or doing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exercises
owing to the fact that awareness of obesity or getting weight does not
be mentioned
via TV
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programmes
or Ads by authorities. If the
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government
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started
a campaign around the country and encouraged community to do
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exercises
in a facility, it would be a more fascinating activity and
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people
could tend to enrol more in sports activities.

In conclusion
, obesity a result of sedentary lifestyle is a serious
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problem
and it can be
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prevented
by raising awareness on how it is
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important
to do
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exercises
to solve this issue.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Chant in PoetryChant is the rhythmic speaking or signing of words or sounds, often primarily on one or two pitches called reciting tones. It is one or the features that affect greatly in poetry. There are two ways that a chant is formed in poetry. A chant v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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