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Describe an activity you do when you are alone

Describe an activity you do when you are alone nxPk7
Finding little free time in this difficult and complicated modern world where we are all busy is never an easy proposition. And, this is true at least for me. So whenever I manage my free time, I make sure I make the best use of it by listening to music. Listening to my favorite music is very relaxing for me and I feel refreshed and energized with this activity. This is one of the most effective ways to relax both mentally and physically and for me it has been scientifically proven to be a very effective way to relax. If I'm at home, I listen to music on my computer or in the music player, even when I take a nap. Sitting on the balcony and listening to soft music is an out-of-this-world experience that I usually enjoy. When I work, I use my iPod to listen to my favorite songs, especially Chinese instrumental music. I mostly listen to music by myself but sometimes I listen to it with friends who have similar musical tastes. But most of the time I enjoy music alone…”. I like to spend my leisure time in this way mainly because it fits perfectly into my “comfortable” lifestyle.
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in this difficult and complicated modern world where we are all busy is never an easy proposition. And, this is true at least for me.
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whenever I manage my free
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, I
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of it by listening to
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. Listening to my favorite
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music
is
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very
relaxing for me and I feel refreshed and energized with this activity. This is one of the most effective ways to relax both mentally and
physically
and for me it has been
scientifically
proven to be a
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very
effective way to relax. If I'm at home, I
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listen
to
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music
on my computer or in the
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music
player, even when I take a nap. Sitting on the balcony and listening to soft
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music
is an out-of-this-world experience that I
usually
enjoy. When I work, I
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use
my iPod to
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listen
to my favorite songs,
especially
Chinese instrumental
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music
. I
mostly
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listen
to
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by myself
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listen
to it with friends who have similar musical tastes.
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But
most of the
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time
I enjoy
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alone…”. I like to spend my leisure
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in this way
mainly
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into my “comfortable” lifestyle.

IELTS essay Describe an activity you do when you are alone

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
203 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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