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Multinational enterprises

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Multinational enterprises have been more and more popular in today’s business world. It is claimed that these enterprises arise plenty of opportunities for the host countries; simultaneously, they are also pregnant with drawbacks in some fields. Transitional corporations ate really motivation for less developed nations. Firstly, thanks to the projects in building factories and infrastructure, they create jobs for a great number of people in the local regions and train them to become skilled workers. Secondly, due to their activities these corporations help other nations change economic mechanism as well as broaden export and import, which enables them to gain further integration into global economy. Internationally viewing, conglomerates are also considered one hope towards hunger eradication and poverty alleviation in developing countries. Additionally, the local industry can get higher technology from foreign countries through transitional companies, which helps improve on technological parameter. On the other hand, multinational enterprises obviously have definite negative impacts. First, the jobs that they create are not constantly secure because these enterprises could relocate into another country, which is caused by management barriers in the host nation. Second, in developing economics, large multinational companies can make local firms become broke. Last but not least, during maximizing profits, transitional corporations often contribute to pollution in the local areas, which puts the environment under threat. To summarize, despites causing inevitable negative impact when setting up business in other nations countries, transitional enterprises are evidently appealing to and are welcomed by the nations provided that they practise well corporate social responsibilities apart from making money.
Multinational
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enterprises
have been more and more popular in
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today
’s business world. It
is claimed
that these
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enterprises
arise
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plenty
of opportunities for the host
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countries
;
simultaneously
, they are
also
pregnant with drawbacks in
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some
fields.

Transitional corporations ate
really
motivation for less developed
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nations
.
Firstly
, thanks to the projects in building factories and infrastructure, they create jobs for a great number of
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people
in the
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local
regions and train them to become skilled workers.
Secondly
, due to their activities these corporations
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help
other
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nations
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change
economic mechanism
as well
as broaden export and import, which enables them to gain
further
integration into global economy.
Internationally
viewing, conglomerates are
also
considered one hope towards hunger eradication and poverty alleviation in developing
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countries
.
Additionally
, the
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local
industry can
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get
higher technology from foreign
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countries
through transitional
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companies
, which
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helps
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improve
on technological parameter.

On the other hand
, multinational
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enterprises
obviously
have
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definite
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negative
impacts.
First
, the jobs that they create are not
constantly
secure
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because
these
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enterprises
could relocate into another
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country
, which
is caused
by management barriers in the host
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nation
. Second, in developing economics, large multinational
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companies
can
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make
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local
firms become broke. Last
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but
not least, during maximizing profits, transitional corporations
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often
contribute to pollution in the
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local
areas, which puts the environment under threat.

To summarize
,
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despites
causing inevitable
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negative
impact when setting up business in other
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nations
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countries
, transitional
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enterprises
are
evidently
appealing to and
are welcomed
by the
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nations
provided that they
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practise
well corporate social responsibilities apart from making money.
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IELTS essay Multinational enterprises

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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