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Describe about yourself, plan in future, what is your strenght and weakness

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Thank you for arranging this interview, I’m very grateful. I am glad to say a little about myself; My full name is Hoang Nguyen Cong Khanh, I am a recent graduate student, my major is Preventive Medicine at HUMP. Every morning, i will jogging over 3 bridges and riverside roads and observe anything around me like dawn, the bee sound, people swimming then do some bodyweight workout. i am milk tea fanatic and my plan in short term is get some health coach lesson because i desire to have a better health for me, for everyone
Thank you for arranging this interview, I’m
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grateful. I am glad to say a
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about myself; My full name is
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Hoang
Nguyen Cong
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Khanh
, I am a recent graduate student, my major is Preventive Medicine at HUMP. Every morning,
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will
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jogging
over 3 bridges and riverside roads and observe anything around me like dawn, the bee sound,
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people
swimming then do
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some
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bodyweight
workout.
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i
am milk tea fanatic and my plan in short term is
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get
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some
health coach lesson
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because
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i
desire to have a better health for me, for
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everyone

IELTS essay Describe about yourself, plan in future, what is your strenght and weakness

Essay
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1 paragraphs
95 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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