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describe about yourself in 200 words

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My full name is Thien Thanh, which means blue sky, a meaningful name to me. I was born and raised in Cao Lanh district. I am currently studying as a senior at Cao Lanh City high school. I am really into Korean culture, especially Kpop and K-drama. Watching K-drama and enjoying Kpop music make me a new person, have positive energy and always motivate me to be better every day. Everyone told me that they really love my smile that makes them feel like I am always a sociable and energetic child. Apparently that is my biggest charm. Another attractive point that I am confident in my eyes especially my eyelashes, My face basically I take after my elder brother, so people told me that I am a girl version of him. I started to learn IELTS to improve my ability to control and use English as fluently as possible. I think it provides me with all the skills I need to master this language. Also, the IELTS is the entrance requirement for my favorite major- International Relations that I will try to apply to next year. Recently, I participate in a psychology project that aims to avoid school violence as a member of the media team. Working with many excellent people remarkably brings me a good deal of knowledge about psychology, change my point of view and show me many contrast sides of violence. Besides, they bring me experience of using new tools by doing different tasks. My friend and I are going to organize a volunteer club at school in order to help disadvantaged people. We planned in detail but it has been postponed due to the Covid-19. I think both of us love doing charity work. Furthermore, it will become a good point for my future profile.
My full name is
Thien
Thanh, which means blue sky, a meaningful name to me. I
was born
and raised in
Cao
Lanh
district. I am
currently
studying as a senior at
Cao
Lanh
City high school.
I
am
really
into Korean culture,
especially
Kpop
and K-drama. Watching K-drama and enjoying
Kpop
music
make
me a new person, have
positive
energy and always motivate me to be better every day. Everyone
told
me that they
really
love
my smile that
makes
them feel like I am always a sociable and energetic child.
Apparently
that is
my biggest charm. Another attractive point that I am confident in my eyes
especially
my eyelashes, My face
basically
I take after my elder brother,
so
people
told
me that I am a girl version of him. I
started
to learn IELTS to
improve
my ability to control and
use
English as
fluently
as possible. I
think
it provides me with all the
skills
I need to master this language.
Also
, the IELTS is the entrance requirement for my favorite major- International Relations that I will try to apply to
next
year. Recently, I participate in a psychology project that aims to avoid school violence as a member of the media team. Working with
many
excellent
people
remarkably
brings me a
good
deal of knowledge about psychology,
change
my point of view and
show
me
many
contrast sides of violence.
Besides
, they bring me experience of using new tools by doing
different
tasks. My friend and I are going to organize a volunteer club at school in order to
help
disadvantaged
people
. We planned in detail
but
it has
been postponed
due to the Covid-19. I
think
both of us
love
doing charity work.
Furthermore
, it will become a
good
point for my future profile.
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IELTS essay describe about yourself in 200 words

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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