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My name is THUYHIEN, I'm currently a second year student at University of Economics Ho Chi Minh city. My mayor is Banking which I believe its return the job and high salary for my future. I come from a small province with slightly more than 1 million people, this is Tra Vinh one of the province of Mekong Delta. Having a favorable position as it is located between two large rivers, the Tien and Hau rivers, the land here is filled with fertile alluvium. I like traditional festivals in my hometown because on these occasions local people will wear traditional costumes with extremely eye-catching colors, traditional dances will be performed in the festival, it is very vibrant and has a certain character. that I can only see when I'm here. Personally, it’s a bit boring for me because as a small town, there is not much shopping mall or any other means of entertainment. Local go to bed very early and the streets are not bustle at night. However, I believe that it has been improving day by day and becoming a potential hotspot due to the increasing number of annual visitors. In the future, I hope my hometown will open fashionable boutique, restaurant or may be a high-rise flat.
My name is
THUYHIEN
, I'm
currently
a second year student at University of Economics
Ho Chi Minh city
. My mayor is Banking which I believe its return the job and high salary for my future. I
come
from a
small
province with
slightly
more than 1 million
people
, this is
Tra
Vinh
one of the province of Mekong Delta. Having a favorable position as it
is located
between two large rivers, the
Tien
and
Hau
rivers, the land here
is filled
with fertile alluvium. I like traditional festivals in my hometown
because
on these occasions local
people
will wear traditional costumes with
extremely
eye-catching colors, traditional dances will
be performed
in the festival, it is
very
vibrant and has a certain character.
that
I can
only
see
when I'm here.
Personally
, it’s a bit boring for me
because
as a
small
town, there is not much shopping mall or any other means of entertainment. Local go to bed
very
early and the streets are not bustle at night.
However
, I believe that it has been improving day by day and becoming a potential hotspot due to the increasing number of annual visitors. In the future, I hope my hometown will open fashionable boutique, restaurant or may be a high-rise flat.
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IELTS essay describe about your hometown

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
210 words
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