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Today I want to tell you about my hobby. Exactly 4 years ago, when I was in my first year of secondary school, I was quiet depressed back then, I was doing same and boring things every day, there was nothing special. After that, my best friend invited me to play badminton with her and classmates. So I was so into that sport. This sport game is convenient for you to play everywhere, every time you want. But I usually play it in my leisure times or ON the weekend with my friends or my parents. In addition, playing badminton can help us lose weight, keep strong and reduce STRESS after a hard working day. Especially, this sport game can connect you with others so we feel more confident and self-motivated. Why don't you play and try it? I think it really excited and suitable for you.

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