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Describe about wave-energy generator

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The figure illustrates the wave-energy machine and it describes how the electricity is being generated from the waves. The wave energy is being converted into airflow which is being used to run the turbines from which the electricity is being generated. The waves bring the water to the wave-energy machine which increases the water levels in the lower chamber then the airflow due to this water levels turn the turbine and the inlet for the air is in the top of the chamber and this rotation of turbines generated the electricity in the electricity generator. The second picture illustrates that the installation of wave-energy machines nearer to land incurs low installation costs but has low output whereas installation of wave-energy machines in depths of ocean has high installation costs and also produces high output The given figures clearly illustrate the working of wave-energy machines and their outputs and installation costs when installed at different depths of ocean.
The figure illustrates the wave-energy
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machine
and it
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describes
how the
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electricity
is
being generated
from the waves.

The wave energy is
being converted
into airflow which is being
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used
to run the turbines from which the
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electricity
is
being generated
.

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The
waves bring the water to the wave-energy
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machine
which increases the water levels in the lower chamber then the airflow due to this water levels turn the turbine and the inlet for the air is in the top of the chamber and this rotation of turbines generated the
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electricity
in the
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electricity
generator.

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The
second picture illustrates that the installation of wave-energy
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machines
nearer to land incurs low installation costs
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but
has low output whereas installation of wave-energy
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machines
in depths of ocean has high installation costs and
also
produces high output

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The
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given
figures
clearly
illustrate the working of wave-energy
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machines
and their outputs and installation costs when installed at
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different
depths of ocean.

IELTS essay Describe about wave-energy generator

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
157 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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