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Government is imposing taxes on vehicle, on citi centres during rush hours. What is positive ablnd negative about this? Give your opinion.

Government is imposing taxes on vehicle, on citi centres during rush hours. What is positive ablnd negative about this? Give your opinion. 7r1Ky
In this modernized world, ministry of government has been passing strict rules like penality on vehicles in busy hours at citi centers. In this essay we will discuss about advantages and also disadvatages for this topic. Iam strongly agreed with taxes on vehicles. Comming to positives: firstly, reduce the traffic congestion on cities. Because number of people have been using own vehicle for their transportation. Due to this penality, people are scared so their will use public transport. For instance, in our state government started a rule with tax: wearing helmet. At present, every person uses helmet. Secondly, this penality money will be useful for the development of our country. Because India is developing country. It has no enough budget. For example: ministry of our state government, the tax money used for the new equipment of public schools. So finally it has more pros. Iam favour of this topic. On the other hand, they have some negatives. Importantly, it is burden for middle and low class people. Because they receives only less amount of salaries. For example, one person having 10, 000 salary for a month. Wearing a helmet missed in two times in busy schedule. So 2000 money paid to the public. At that situation, the remaining money is not sufficient for the whole month. Moreover, plenty of politicians who are in government misused this property. They have no ethical values. For example, in our country ministers have been working with napotisim and also government funds used for their own benifits. These disadvantages will more effect on low class people. To repacapulate, it is vivid that in this fast faced society public sector is imposing taxes on vehicles in towns. In this essay we disscussed mandetory pros like reduce own vehicles in addition to tax amount is useful for public. On contrary, we also discussed negatives: burden for poor people and misused this funds. So, advantaged outweigh the disadvantages. Then, I am strongly agreed that taxes on vehicles rule.
In this modernized world, ministry of
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has been passing strict
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rules
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penality
on
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vehicles
in busy hours at
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citi
centers. In this essay we will
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taxes
on vehicles.

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,
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reduce
the traffic congestion on cities.
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number of
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people
have been using
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own
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vehicle
for their transportation. Due to this
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penality
,
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people
are scared
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their will
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use
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public
transport.
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, in our state
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started
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with
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tax
: wearing helmet. At present, every person
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uses
helmet.
Secondly
, this
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penality
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money
will be useful for the development of our country.
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Because
India is
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developing country
. It has no
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enough
budget.
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: ministry of our state
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government
, the
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tax
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money
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used
for the new equipment of
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public
schools.
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finally
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favour
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, they have
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negatives.
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.
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receives
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less amount of salaries.
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, one person having 10, 000 salary for a month. Wearing a helmet missed in two times in busy schedule.
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2000
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money
paid to the
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public
. At that situation, the remaining
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money
is not sufficient for the whole month.
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,
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plenty
of politicians who are in
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government
misused this property. They have no ethical values.
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, in our country ministers have been working with
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napotisim
and
also
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funds
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used
for their
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benifits
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sector is imposing
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vehicles
in towns. In this essay we
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disscussed
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pros like
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reduce
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own
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vehicles
in addition
to
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tax
amount is useful for
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public
. On contrary, we
also
discussed negatives: burden for poor
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people
and misused this funds.
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, advantaged outweigh the disadvantages. Then, I am
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taxes
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IELTS essay Government is imposing taxes on vehicle, on citi centres during rush hours. What is positive ablnd negative about this? Give your opinion.

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