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travelling (Discuss and state your preference)

travelling (Discuss and state your preference) 5AVBm
Nowadays, traveling is the most important activity which people do it for many reasons. We have different types of travel, like business travel, family travel, adventure travel, etc. Personally, I prefer adventure travel individually because I think this type of traveling helps me to improve my mental skills, such as increasing focus level, improving patience, also by traveling I can reducing my stress level, especially that I live in a metropolitan. On the other hand, by traveling I can see new places where I read or hear about them, also I have the situation to increase my knowledge about geography, nation, and other languages. For example, when I go to the Yazd, I learn many things about people’s lifestyle who live in it, I get to know about their traditional food or activity, in addition, I see the desert of Yazd and it’s a good experience for me. In the end, traveling is the main activity in life and people by traveling can improve their experience and knowledge.
Nowadays, traveling is the most
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, family
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, adventure
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individually
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this type of traveling
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me to
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improve
my mental
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skills
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also
by traveling I can
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in a metropolitan.
On the other hand
, by traveling I can
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see
new places where I read or hear about them,
also
I have the situation to increase my knowledge about geography, nation, and other languages.
For example
, when I go to the
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’s lifestyle who
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in it, I
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the desert of
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experience for me.

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, traveling is the main activity in life and
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by traveling can
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IELTS essay travelling (Discuss and state your preference)

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
168 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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