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The author of the reading presents three thories about why gasoline fuel should not be replaced by ethanol fuel.

The author of the reading presents three thories about why gasoline fuel should not be replaced by ethanol fuel. Ep25L
The author of the reading presents three thories about why gasoline fuel should not be replaced by ethanol fuel. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the reading. According to the reading, ethanol fuel don't reduce carbon dioxide gas production. This specific argument is challenged by the author. He mentions that ethanol fuel will reduce carbon dioxide in a explicit way. Additionally, he points out that if plants are used for ethanol fuel production, then people will grow those plants more than the before. As plants consume carbon dioxide, carbon dioxide will be reduced. Secondly, The lecturer said that animals normally don't eat the parts of the plant which contains celolose. On the hand, parts of the plant containing celolose are used for ethanol fuel production purpose. So, production of ethanol fuel don't hamper animals' food supply. This directly contradicts what the author indicates. Finally, the author posits that the price of the ethanol fuel will be much greater than gasoline fuel. The lecturer, however, asserts that, if the production of ethanol fuel increases than before, then the price will be droped. He claims that according to a study, prices of ethanol fuel will be dropped by 40%, if the production increases three times than before.
The
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author
of the reading presents three
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thories
about why gasoline
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fuel
should not
be replaced
by
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ethanol
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fuel
. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the reading.

According to the reading,
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ethanol
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fuel
don't
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reduce
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carbon
dioxide gas
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production
. This specific argument
is challenged
by the
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author
. He mentions that
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ethanol
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fuel
will
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reduce
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carbon
dioxide
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in a explicit way
.
Additionally
, he points out that if
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plants
are
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used
for
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ethanol
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fuel
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production
, then
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people
will grow those
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plants
more than the
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before
. As
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plants
consume
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carbon
dioxide,
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carbon
dioxide will be
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reduced
.

Secondly
, The lecturer said that animals
normally
don't eat the parts of the
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plant
which contains
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celolose
. On the hand, parts of the
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plant
containing
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celolose
are
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used
for
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ethanol
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fuel
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production
purpose.
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So
,
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production
of
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ethanol
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fuel
don't hamper animals' food supply. This
directly
contradicts what the
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author
indicates.

Finally
, the
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author
posits that the price of the
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ethanol
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fuel
will be much greater than gasoline
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fuel
. The lecturer,
however
, asserts that, if the
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production
of
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ethanol
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fuel
increases than
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before
, then the price will
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be droped
. He claims that according to a study, prices of
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ethanol
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fuel
will
be dropped
by 40%, if the
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production
increases three
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times
than
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before
.
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IELTS essay The author of the reading presents three thories about why gasoline fuel should not be replaced by ethanol fuel.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
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