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Describe about video games is good or bad for people

Describe about video games is good or bad for people 1oPp7
Many people and children are playing video games, now day video games craz increasing day by day in various country. While something it is positive usefully for human life more than others harmfully effect. However I believe that video games is beneficial for students concentrations, problem solving skills, planning ability and sharpness usefull in their beautiful life. Gamers play various computer games like PUBG, Candi crash, case of claim and lot's of games people play on their free time for enjoyment. Most of users play game for intertainment perpose and others sides some people play game for their particular purpose like a rise a knowledge, education tools and concentrations Power. According to My personal perspective, human should be play game for their positive response. Others hand we can see drawbacks of video games, it's throughout people wast their valuable time doing for daily tasks completed. sociaty spend mostly time on video games in that time human forgot about they Play since how much time, so they can their importance time use in play video games. It's throughout people addicted of video games and most importantly loss is health like eyes brightness down constantly. In conclusion, It seems to me that the potential dangerous of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.
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people
and children are playing
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video
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games
,
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now
day
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craz
increasing day by day in various country. While
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something it
is
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positive
usefully
for human life more than others
harmfully
effect.
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However
I believe that
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video
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games
is beneficial for students concentrations, problem solving
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skills
, planning ability and sharpness
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usefull
in their
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beautiful
life. Gamers
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play
various computer
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games
like PUBG,
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Candi
crash, case of claim and
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lot's
of
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games
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people
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play
on their free
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time
for enjoyment.
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Most of users
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play
game for
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intertainment
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perpose
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and others
sides
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some
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people
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play
game for their particular purpose like a rise a knowledge, education tools and concentrations Power. According to My personal perspective, human should be
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play
game for their
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positive
response. Others hand we can
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see
drawbacks of
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video
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, it's throughout
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people
wast their valuable
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time
doing for daily tasks completed.
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sociaty
spend
mostly
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time
on
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games
in that
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time
human forgot about they
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Play
since how much
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time
,
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so
they can their importance
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time
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use
in
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play
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video
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games
. It's throughout
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people
addicted of
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video
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games
and most
importantly
loss is health like eyes brightness down
constantly
.
In conclusion
, It seems to me that the potential
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dangerous
of
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video
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are more significant than the possible benefits.
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IELTS essay Describe about video games is good or bad for people

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
213 words
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