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describe about a livable city in the world

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The Danish capital Copenhagen is known as the happiest and most livable city in the world. Danish people in this city are very hospitable and friendly. They have an eco-friendly lifestyle. They use bicycles instead of cars to go to work, more than half of civilian use bicycle to commute everyday and cycling has become a familiar activity of the people in here. In addition, Copenhagen has a modern education with high quality training and it’s one of the cities with low crime rate, it has many cultural, historical and recreational attraction.

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IELTS essay describe about a livable city in the world

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