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Describe a website on the Internet that you use regularly

Describe a website on the Internet that you use regularly ELxlx
Facebook is a social networking website, which is no admission charge for people all over the world to post comments, share photos, have live chats and update viral news Honestly, I am benefited with the website in various ways. To begin with, facebook allows me to keep up to date with what my friends are doing and text them whenever I want. Additionally, facebook brings me satisfaction after a long exhausted day by some humorous pictures called " meme ", fascinating review films and important news. Last but not least, I can make my purchases with a click instead of wasting much time going from stores to stores But facebook still has disadvantages notwithstanding, many toxic contents everywhere and everyday make me concerned that people's minds could be affected to greater or less degree. Furthermore, it is worth noting that bad people with high qualification in technology can easily infiltrate and appropriate my account, it is so dangerous! Personally, facebook makes my life less dull than ever. In a word, I am keen on getting into this website everyday as it seems to be my miniature society. However, sometimes I realize that I have spent so much time on it and should attach special importance on face-to-face relationships in my real life
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people
all over the world to post comments, share photos, have
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live
chats and update viral news

Honestly
, I
am benefited
with the website in various ways. To
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begin
with,
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facebook
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allows
me to
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keep
up to date with what my friends are doing and text them whenever I want.
Additionally
,
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facebook
brings me satisfaction after a long exhausted day by
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some
humorous pictures called
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meme
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"
, fascinating review films and
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important
news. Last
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but
not least, I can
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make
my
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purchases
with a click
instead
of wasting much time going from stores to stores

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But
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facebook
still
has disadvantages notwithstanding,
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many
toxic contents everywhere and everyday
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make
me concerned that
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people
's minds could be
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affected
to greater or less degree.
Furthermore
, it is worth noting that
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bad
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people
with high qualification in technology can
easily
infiltrate and appropriate my account, it is
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so
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dangerous
!

Personally
,
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facebook
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makes
my life less dull than ever. In a word, I am keen on getting into this website
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everyday
as it seems to be my miniature society.
However
,
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sometimes
I realize that I have spent
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so
much time on it and should attach special importance on face-to-face relationships in my real life
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IELTS essay Describe a website on the Internet that you use regularly

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
211 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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