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DESCRIBE A TRIP BY PUBLIC TRANSPORT

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To be honest, in Vietnam, there are not many public transport but only buses. So today I will talk about buses in my country. Buses in Vietnam are usually green or blue. This public transport in Vietnam is very popular, especially for students because it is quite convenient and economical. However, Vietnamese people still do not use public transport much, one of the reasons is that in Vietnam buses are quite dirty and complicated. People will often use motorbikes to move around more easily. That's why I rarely use the bus. However, recently the government has made significant changes to the service and quality of the bus so I thought I would try using it again as it would help to somewhat protect the environment. Moreover, soon there will be a Metro line in the city and people are very excited and looking forward to it. I think in the future Vietnamese people will change their habits of using public transport.
To be honest, in Vietnam, there are not
many
public
transport
but
only
buses.
So
today
I will talk about buses in my country. Buses in Vietnam are
usually
green or blue. This
public
transport
in Vietnam is
very
popular,
especially
for students
because
it is quite convenient and economical.
However
, Vietnamese
people
still
do not
use
public
transport
much, one of the reasons is that in Vietnam buses are quite dirty and complicated.
People
will
often
use
motorbikes to
move
around more
easily
. That's why I rarely
use
the bus.
However
, recently the
government
has made significant
changes
to the service and quality of the bus
so
I
thought
I would try using it again as it would
help
to somewhat protect the environment.
Moreover
,
soon
there will be a Metro line in the city and
people
are
very
excited and looking forward to it. I
think
in the future Vietnamese
people
will
change
their habits of using
public
transport
.
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IELTS essay DESCRIBE A TRIP BY PUBLIC TRANSPORT

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
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