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tell about your idol Taylor Swift

tell about your idol Taylor Swift 0EQKQ

I am a fan of Taylor Swift. She is my all time favorite celebrity and even though she is in her 30s now, she still very pretty. she is a famous singer and a talented song writter and producer. i came to know her through mv call " Me" since 2019. but not everyone knows she used to be so hard to get to where she is today. she used to pursue a career in country music before and she became famous at around 16. In few years, people often mention the song namely "love story" which she composed based on the " romeo and juliet ". and until I knew that song was also inspired by her high school love story, I was very impressed.

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