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Describe a time you were extremely happy.What happened?

Describe a time you were extremely happy. What happened? bbob6

There are a lot of instances where I was supremely happy and joyous. One such incident was when I secured 98 percent in my board exams. Eventhough I worked hard for my exams, I did not expect such high scores. The day when I got my result is one of the most memorable and happiest days of my life which I will cherish for eternity. In conclusion, I was very happy on the day I got my results because of the fact that I reaped the benefits of my perseverance, determination and hardwork.

There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 instances where I was supremely
 happy and joyous. One such incident was when I secured 98 percent in my board exams. Possible spelling mistake found.Even though
Eventhough
 I worked This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for my exams, I did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 such high scores. The day when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my result is one of the most memorable and happiest days of my life which I will cherish for eternity. In conclusion
, I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy on the day I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my results This phrase is redundant. Consider using "because".because
because of the fact that
 I reaped the benefits of my perseverance, determination and Possible spelling mistake found.handworkhard work
hardwork
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