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Describe a time you used a foreign language to communicate

Describe a time you used a foreign language to communicate QM1dy
It was a beautiful day in the summer, I met a lot of Koreans at the church, they had a worldshop. I cannot speak Korean with them. Howerver, I can communicate with them in English. To be honest, when I took with them, I had to communicate and translate. And I find it unnatural, uncomfortable In communication so I was determined to learn more vocabulary so I could communicate easily. In this time, They asked me about the rooms: the kitchen, the restroom and when they wanted to print text, where should the go and operating time. It my first time using English to communicate and I found it very useful, a very enjoyable experience
It was a
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beautiful
day in the summer, I met
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a lot of
Koreans at the

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church
, they had a
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worldshop
. I cannot speak Korean with them.
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Howerver
, I can communicate with them in English. To be honest, when I took with them, I had
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to


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communicate
and translate.

And I

find it unnatural, uncomfortable In communication

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so
I
was determined
to learn more vocabulary
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so
I could communicate
easily
. In this time, They asked me about the rooms: the kitchen, the restroom and when they wanted to print text, where should the go and operating time. It my
first
time using English to communicate and I found it
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very
useful, a
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very
enjoyable
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experience

IELTS essay Describe a time you used a foreign language to communicate

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
114 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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