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Describe a time when you wake up early in the morning

Describe a time when you wake up early in the morning XD6ow
I usually wake up at 7 a. m. because I am doing my graduation in the final year and I have to study for whole night and I spend my full day with study at 12 a. m. and I can't cannot sleep before it so I have no experience of morning walk or morning exercise but once the time when I have to wake up early in the morning that time my call is organised trip so we have to wake up early in the morning because college decided to go outside and we have to visit a zoo park which is related to my zoology subject so it's a really important to wake up early in the morning and that time I have to wake up at 4 a. m. because 5 a. m. we have to leave out the station so this was a time when I was wake up early in the morning and it's really a good experience for me I really felt morning walk and I do some morning exercise which is really good for health after that I realise I can I improve my evening power and then I can easily get up morning and also do some morning walk and exercise and so early so that's why
I
usually
wake up at 7 a. m.
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because
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have to
study for whole night and I spend my full day with study at 12 a. m. and I can't cannot sleep
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before
it
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so
I have no experience of
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morning
walk or
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morning
exercise
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but
once the
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time
when I
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have to
wake up
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early
in the
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morning
that
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time
my call is
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organised
trip
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so
we
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have to
wake up
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early
in the
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morning
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because
college decided to go
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outside and
we
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have to
visit a zoo park which
is related
to my zoology subject
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so
it's a
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really
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important
to wake up
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early
in the
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morning
and that
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time
I
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have to
wake up at 4 a. m.
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because
5 a. m. we
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have to
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leave
out the station
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so
this was a
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time
when I was
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wake
up
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early
in the
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and it's
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a
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experience for me I
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really
felt
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morning
walk and I do
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some
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morning
exercise which is
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really
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good
for health after that I
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realise
I can I
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improve
my evening power and then I can
easily
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get
up
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morning
and
also
do
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some
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morning
walk and exercise and
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so
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early
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that's why
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you wake up early in the morning

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
214 words
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