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Although technology such as the Internet has increased the ease and speed with which people

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from different countries communicate, there still exist misunderstandings about each other’s cultures and beliefs. For example, people seem to be no closer in their understanding of faiths other than their own. Communication technology may have the potential to improve the world, but we have not exploited that potential to best effect. Drivers who exceed safe speed limits, for example, cause many accidents. In addition, drivers often overtake when it is not safe to do so, such as on sharp bends. Finally, many road deaths are due to people driving when under the influence of alcohol. Have the recent rapid developments in communication technology made the world a better place? It is sometimes said that modern technology has helped create greater understanding between nations. However, there is little evidence to support this view. There is, of course, a human factor involved in road safety. Most road accidents are caused by careless and irresponsible driving. These are just a few examples of how human error or recklessness can lead to tragedy on the roads.
from
different
countries communicate, there
still
exist misunderstandings about each other’s

cultures
and beliefs.

For example
,
people
seem to be no closer in their understanding of faiths other than their
own
.

Communication technology may have the potential to
improve
the world,
but
we have not

exploited
that potential to best effect.

Drivers who exceed safe speed limits,
for example
, cause
many
accidents.
In addition
,
drivers


often
overtake when it is not safe to do
so
, such as on sharp bends.

Finally
,
many
road deaths are due to
people
driving when under the influence of alcohol.

Have the recent rapid developments in communication technology made the world a better

place?

It is
sometimes
said that modern technology has
helped
create greater understanding between

nations.
However
, there is
little
evidence to support this view.

There is,
of course
, a human factor involved in road safety. Most road accidents
are caused
by


careless
and irresponsible driving.

These are
just
a few examples of how human error or recklessness can lead to tragedy on the

roads
.
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IELTS essay Although technology such as the Internet has increased the ease and speed with which people

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