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Describe a time when you tried to do something but were not successful

Describe a time when you tried to do something but were not successful Y2kQr

It was the time ehen i was attending the graduation. I completed my graduation from University of Liberal Arts Bangladesh. Our business club organized a business plan competition. I formed a group of four to compete in the competition. We tried to create a uniquqe business plan. The purpose of the business plan competition was to dig for prospective minds that can crack new ideas, it was a very tough compettition. There were twenty five groups. We managed to enter in to the second round. Our business plan did not worked out well because there was some lackings in the forming of plan. May be it needed more clarification and research. Also in the last presentation day our two group members did not show up and out us in a perplexed situatin. I have never felt decieved like that.

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 was attending the graduation. I completed my graduation from University of Liberal Arts Bangladesh. Our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 club organized a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
 competition.

I formed a group of four to compete in the competition. We tried to create Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
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uniquqe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
. The purpose of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
 competition was to dig for prospective minds that can crack new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
, it was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 tough Possible spelling mistake found.competition
compettition
.

There were This word is normally spelled with hyphen.twenty-five
twenty five
 groups. We managed to enter in to the second round. Our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
 did not The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "work"work
worked
 out well This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible spelling mistake found.lackingbackingssackingslickingslac kings
lackings
 in the forming of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
. Did you mean "maybe" (= perhaps)?Maybe
May be
 it needed more clarification and research. Also
 in the last presentation day our two group members did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 up and out us in a perplexed Possible spelling mistake found.situationsituating
situatin
.

I have never felt Possible spelling mistake found.deceived
decieved
 like that. 