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Describe a time when you traveled by public transportation

Here I would like to talk about a time when I travelled by bus I and my brother traveled on our car we were going to meet my maternal uncle from to Chandigarh to Chandigarh from Patiala and my and we were made on the way suddenly aka started off zod sounds and my my brother dropped the car on the side of the road and I we were we did and he he was a checking the checking the car but he didn't find any issue about it and after that he tried to start the car but car didn't start and he tried many times but all in vain after that we decided to park the car on the road. Causes sore darkest day and after that we decided to take a bus we are we going we went to the near bus stop and took away after that we have a full of head full of passengers and we didn't get seat. The passengers pushing one another and the conductor cut the tickets very recklessly after that we eyes Thanks thank goodness because my brother with me on the on the travel because it is not easy it was not easy for me travelled by bus alone everyone step doubt on my step up on my photo lastly I would say I must say and that private vehicles are very useful as compared to public transportation so that was a time when I started I travelled by bus
Here I would like to talk about a time when I travelled by bus I and my brother traveled on our
car
we were going to
meet
my maternal uncle from to Chandigarh to Chandigarh from Patiala and my and we
were made
on the way
suddenly
aka
started
off zod sounds and my my brother dropped the
car
on the side of the road and I we were we did and he he was a checking the checking the
car
but
he didn't find any issue about it and after that he tried to
start
the
car
but
car
didn't
start
and he tried
many
times
but
all in vain after that we decided to park the
car
on the road. Causes sore darkest day and after that we decided to take a bus we are we going we went to the near bus
stop
and took away after that we have a full of head full of passengers and we didn't
get
seat. The passengers pushing one another and the conductor
cut
the tickets
very
recklessly
after that we eyes Thanks thank goodness
because
my brother with me on the on the travel
because
it is not easy it was not easy for me travelled by bus alone everyone step doubt on my step up on my photo
lastly
I would say I
must
say and that private vehicles are
very
useful as compared to public transportation
so
that was a time when I
started
I travelled by bus
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you traveled by public transportation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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