Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

some people believe its better to leave home and stay alone or with friends.

Friends are very important part of our lives with whom we can share our thoughts and beliefs. There are people who believes that is better to have friends with similar thoughts and opinions and others thinks its better to have a friend who sometimes disagrees with us. To begin with, friends with similar thoughts and opinions are quite easy to to adjust and provide a better moral support during hardships. friends with similar mindset tend to recover fast from anxiety and stress when they share their problems with one another. To add more it is also evident that the chances of arguments and fights are less between lie minded people. However, friends who disagrees with us sometimes can also be good friend as they may have different idea in certain topics which we might not know. This might help to solve a problem from different angle. But a strong disagreement can lead to arguments and fights. friends who sometimes disagrees with our opinion often shows us the reality of life. For instance, I have a friend who sometimes disagrees with me during conversation where he states a different opinion and represents the pros and cons of something and resolve the problem. In conclusion, I believe a person should have both like and unlike minded friends and it is a necessity for us to learn something new and even sometimes during a bad phase of life we need someone to console us.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Friends
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
part of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
with whom we can share our thoughts and beliefs. There are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
believes
that is
better to have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
with similar thoughts and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opinions
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
and others
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
its better to have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sometimes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
disagrees
with us. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
with similar thoughts and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opinions
are quite easy to to adjust and provide a better moral support during hardships.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
with similar mindset tend to recover
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
from anxiety and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
when they share their problems with one another. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
more it is
also
evident that the chances of arguments and fights are less between lie minded
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
However
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
disagrees
with us
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sometimes
can
also
be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
as they may have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
in certain topics which we might not know. This might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to solve a problem from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
angle.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
a strong disagreement can lead to arguments and fights.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sometimes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
disagrees
with our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opinion
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
us the reality of life.
For instance
, I have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sometimes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
disagrees
with me during conversation where he states a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
opinion
and represents the pros and cons of something and resolve the problem.
In conclusion
, I believe a person should have both like and unlike minded
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
and it is a necessity for us to learn something new and even
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sometimes
during a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
phase of life we need someone to console us.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay some people believe its better to leave home and stay alone or with friends.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
241 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts