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Describe a time when you got up early

Describe a time when you got up early VEjpm
Well I am not a early webwise I usually spent my evening with this study so I can not sleep before 12 a m so that's why I cannot wake up early in the morning and I usually wake up 7: 00 a. m. after that I do some exercise and I also take a bath and I go in the college what time when I wake up early in the morning that was a time when I have to wake up early because that I'm my school organised a trip and I have to wake up early that time I have to wake up at 4 a. m. because necessary because our school organised trip sharp 5 a. m. and we have to go in the park where I can search many activities so this was a situation when I was wake up early in the morning
Well I am not
a
early
webwise
I
usually
spent my evening with this study
so
I can not sleep
before
12
a
m
so
that's why I cannot wake up
early
in the morning and I
usually
wake up 7: 00 a. m. after that I do
some
exercise and I
also
take a bath and I go in the college what time when I wake up
early
in the morning that was a time when I
have to
wake up
early
because
that I'm my school
organised
a trip and I
have to
wake up
early
that time I
have to
wake up at 4 a. m.
because
necessary
because
our school
organised
trip sharp 5 a. m. and we
have to
go in the park where I can search
many
activities
so
this was a situation when I was
wake
up
early
in the morning
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you got up early

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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