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Describe a time when you got up early

Describe a time when you got up early VEjpm
Well I am not a early webwise I usually spent my evening with this study so I can not sleep before 12 a m so that's why I cannot wake up early in the morning and I usually wake up 7: 00 a. m. after that I do some exercise and I also take a bath and I go in the college what time when I wake up early in the morning that was a time when I have to wake up early because that I'm my school organised a trip and I have to wake up early that time I have to wake up at 4 a. m. because necessary because our school organised trip sharp 5 a. m. and we have to go in the park where I can search many activities so this was a situation when I was wake up early in the morning
Well I am not
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webwise
I
usually
spent my evening with this study
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so
I can not sleep
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before
12
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a
m
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so
that's why I cannot wake up
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early
in the morning and I
usually
wake up 7: 00 a. m. after that I do
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some
exercise and I
also
take a bath and I go in the college what time when I wake up
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early
in the morning that was a time when I
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have to
wake up
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early
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because
that I'm my school
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organised
a trip and I
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have to
wake up
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early
that time I
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have to
wake up at 4 a. m.
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because
necessary
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because
our school
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organised
trip sharp 5 a. m. and we
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have to
go in the park where I can search
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many
activities
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so
this was a situation when I was
Consider using a past participle here: "waked", "woken".
wake
up
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early
in the morning

IELTS essay Describe a time when you got up early

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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