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Describe a time when you first organ in foreign language

Describe a time when you first organ in foreign language LGNlp
There is no doubt whenever we have to speak in foreign language then we faced a lot of difficulties I remember vividly when I was in 12th standard that time my principal recognise the competition on speech that time I took participation in speech and I have to speak in foreign language that is English so I had to prepare about it and I have known that knowledge about the English so I have to speak on environment pollution I put my 100% in my speech and in addition to these my other classmates also took participation in same competition and compete with my all friends and I got first rank in this competition after that I really felt good and it's also a good experience for me I learnt many new things from this competition and I can improve my confidence for speaking skill.
There is no doubt whenever we
have to
speak in foreign language then we faced
a lot of
difficulties I remember
vividly
when I was in 12th standard that time my principal
recognise
the
competition
on speech that time I took participation in speech and I
have to
speak in foreign language
that is
English
so
I had to prepare about it and I have known that knowledge about the English
so
I
have to
speak on environment pollution I put my 100% in my speech and
in addition
to
these my other
classmates
also
took participation in same
competition
and compete with my all friends and I
got
first
rank in this
competition
after that I
really
felt
good
and it's
also
a
good
experience for me I
learnt
many
new things from this
competition
and I can
improve
my confidence for speaking
skill
.
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you first organ in foreign language

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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