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Talk about the advantages and disadvantages of the transportation system in your city?

Talk about the advantages and disadvantages of the transportation system in your city? qkwad

You know, I live in Tehran and the transportation system here is not as efficient as it would be, although, it has many plus points. For example, the subway system is always very crowded and noisy without proper ventilation, on the other hand, the BRT system ventilation and air conditioner always work in good condition. In addition, it is very crowded in peak hours as a subway system. To cap it all, both of them are very fast and convenient in every corner of the city. But I think the government should increase the number of buses and wagons to reduce the crowded congestion in them. And there is one more advantage that I’d like to mention and that is, when we use them, we face fewer dangers such as accidents. Anyway, I prefer using my car rather than using the public transportation system, unless I have to go to the city center where I cannot bring my private car there.

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system
 here is not as efficient as it would be, although, it has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 plus points.

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system
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good
 condition.

In addition
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system
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fast
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But
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think
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government
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reduce
 the crowded congestion in them. And there is one more advantage that I’d like to mention and that is
, when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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dangers
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 than using the public transportation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withorganizationschemerulestructurearrangement
system
, unless I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go to the city center where I cannot bring my private car there. 