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Celebrities should be role models and should behave well in public. Do you agree or disagree? Write a paragraph (120-150 words) to voice your opinion.

Celebrities should be role models and should behave well in public. (120-150 words) to voice your opinion. 5BVNB

Celebrity is a condition of fame and broad public recognition of an individual or group as a result of the attention given to them by mass media. There are significant amount of people debating: “Is it necessary that celebrities should be role models and behave well in public? ”. In my perspective, celebrities should behave well because they are simply public figures. Celebrities should behave responsibly owing to the fact that they exert an enormous influence on teenagers. Young community need beneficial role model in order to with hope, integrity and compassion. For example, when teenagers try to help to others as poor or feeble society, they feel confident and exert more efforts that be useful.

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