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Describe a time when you changed your opinion

Describe a time when you changed your opinion WEb5D

According to me every person change here opinion according to their situation and same thing happening with me when I completed my graduate in medical science and I decided to admission in biotechnology diploma but unfortunately when I came a well-known institute that my teacher's advice me why you choose this course you are really good in science so you definitely good well in MSC so you can took admission in in MSC in geology because I have a definite is about your logi that I I changed my opinion and I took admission in MSC zoology I really felt happy after that and now I really interested to learn more about the geology concept it is also a good way for me and I can solve my all examination with the help of my knowledge and I got first rank apart from the others students so it was a good opinion for me that I was changed with the help of my teacher

This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using "in my opinion" or "I think".In my opinionI think
According to me
 every person This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 here opinion according to their situation and same thing happening The verb 'happen' usually requires the preposition "to".to
with
 me when I completed my graduate in medical science and I decided to admission in biotechnology diploma This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 unfortunately when I came a well-known institute that my teacher's advice me why you choose this course you are really
Use "good at" to mean "skilled" with school subjects. Try this: "good at science".good at science
good in science
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Did you mean "you are"?you are
you
 definitely You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 well in MSC This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "take"take
took
 admission Possible typo: you repeated a wordin
in in
 MSC in geology This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:certainobvious
definite
 is about your Possible spelling mistake found.logiclogologlogsLokiLori
logi
 that Possible typo: you repeated a wordI
I I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 my opinion and I took admission in MSC zoology I really
 felt happy after that and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I really
 interested to learn more about the geology concept it is also
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 way for me and I can solve my all examination with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of my knowledge and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
first
 rank apart from the others students This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it was a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 opinion for me that I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of my teacher