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Describe a time when you are waiting for something special that would happen.

Describe a time when you are waiting for something special that would happen. E7ERB

Well, we are always and excited for something special to happen. And here I would like to share my experience when I was excited about my holidays. Well, the thing is that my family plans holidays once a year and we always eagerly wait for these vacations. The fact is that we go on vacations in the group; my uncles, my aunts and my nephews, nieces, and cousins, we all travel together. This thing makes the holiday fun and enjoyable. Unfortunately, approximately six months ago, when we planned our holiday, my grandmother suddenly fell sick. She had to be hospitalized, and we had to be available for her care. Although we were a little disappointed, of course, our grandma’s health was more important. Well, after few months she got perfectly fine and once again we planned the holidays. This time we were even more excited. We had made all the arrangements to go for the vacations, and this time to search for corona cases; the state forced lockdown, and once again, we couldn’t travel. We had frustrated, but we really couldn’t do anything about it. Finally, last month when corona restrictions were eased, we were keeping our fingers crossed because this time, we didn’t want the vacations to get canceled.

Well, we are always and excited for something special to happen.

And here I would like to share my experience when I was excited
 about my holidays.

Well, the thing is that my family plans holidays once a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).year, and
year and
 we always eagerly
 wait for these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtime offrecessrestbreaklayoffrespite
vacations
. The fact is that we go on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtime offrecessrestbreaklayoffrespite
vacations
 in the group; my uncles, my aunts and my nephews, nieces, and cousins, we all travel together. This thing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 the holiday fun and enjoyable. Unfortunately, approximately six months ago, when we planned our holiday, my grandmother suddenly
 fell sick. She had to be hospitalized
, and we had to be available for her care.

Although we were a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 disappointed, of course
, our grandma’s health was more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
. Well, after few months she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
perfectly
 fine and once again we planned the holidays.

This time we were even more excited. We had made all the arrangements to go for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtime offrecessrestbreaklayoffrespite
vacations
, and this time to search for corona cases; the state forced lockdown, and once again, we couldn’t travel. We had frustrated, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we really
 couldn’t do anything about it.

Finally
, last month when corona restrictions were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
eased
, we were keeping our fingers crossed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this time, we didn’t want the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtime offrecessrestbreaklayoffrespite
vacations
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 canceled. 