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describe a thing you bought and you are happy about explain why you bought it why you selected this product from where you purchased it and explain why are you so happy about it

describe a thing you bought and you are happy about explain why you bought it why you selected this product from where you purchased it and explain why are you so happy about it OV3jp

well! I am a fashion freak. I love to buy trending things such as clothes, footwear, mobile phone and so on. However i would like to talk about my thing that i had purchased last year. Due to this lockdown, all schools were closed and studies can be accomplished through online. So it is quite difficult for me to attend the online classes. I disccuss this situation to my friend and he suggested me to buy smartphone as he was using it and through their online classes could be easily done. I was happy for his decision. After that, i forced my parents for providing me mobile phone so that my classes cannot suffer. Also i checked the price and rate was not high and i was in my budget. Than after two days i went to the market that is Hall Bazzar which is located in Amritsar. The market was quite big and bulk of shops were present there. I bought the phone for about 11000. When i came back home i was happy joyful and happy. Having said that, after the usage for about two to three days the battery backup impressed me by their performance. I thought i was a investment by me. Now i am using this mobile phone and it is quite better and solve my problems related to the study. Overall this is a product that i bought and happy to use.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWell
well
! I am a fashion freak. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 trending things such as clothes, footwear, mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would like to talk about my thing that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 last year.

Due to this lockdown, all schools were closed
 and studies can be accomplished
 through online. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 it is quite difficult for me to attend the online classes. I Possible spelling mistake found.discussdisc cuss
disccuss
 this situation to my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).friend, and
friend and
 he suggested me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 smartphone as he was using it and through their online classes could be easily
 done. I was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcheerfulcontentedoverjoyedecstaticelatedjoyous
happy
 for his decision.

After that, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 forced my parents for providing me mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that my classes cannot suffer. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 the price and rate was not high and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was in my budget. Did you mean "Then"?Then
Than
 after two days Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 went to the market that is
 Hall Possible spelling mistake found.Bazaar
Bazzar
 which is located
 in Amritsar. The market was quite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 and bulk of shops were present there. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 for about 11000. When Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 came back home Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcheerfulcontentedoverjoyedecstaticelatedjoyous
happy
 joyful and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcheerfulcontentedoverjoyedecstaticelatedjoyous
happy
. Having said that, after the usage for about two to three days the battery backup impressed me by their performance. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 investment by me. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am using this mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 and it is quite better and solve my problems related to the study. Overall
 this is a product that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcheerfulcontentedoverjoyedecstaticelatedjoyous
happy
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. 