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Describe a thing that you bought and felt pleased about

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Overall, I particularly love to buy trending things such as mobile phone, clothes and so on. However, I would like to talk here about the most crucial thing that I purchased in five years ago, that was air pods. Actually, all of my classmates possessed airpods which they could listened the lecture easily while I was facing numerous problem, later on, male of my friend suggested that to buy air pods, After that, when I checked the same price, I got shocked as the rates were too high, firstly I engaged to obtain vast information about the aie pods, also its benefits, subsequently, I purchased it from the electronic market. After using it, I think it’s one of the best products that I have used till now as its features are unique. Moreover, the design of AirPods is exceptionally comfortable; therefore, they do not drop and fit into the ear perfectly, in brief, I am very pleased to buy this product, so, I eliminated my listening problem with to buy it, later on, I have never happened any problem since bought air pods.
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, I
particularly
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trending things such as mobile phone, clothes and
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However
, I would like to talk here about the most crucial thing that I
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purchased
in five years ago, that was air
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pods
. Actually, all of my classmates possessed
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airpods
which they could
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listened
the lecture
easily
while I was facing numerous problem, later on, male of my friend suggested that to
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buy
air
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pods
, After that, when I
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checked
the same price, I
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got
shocked as the rates were too high,
firstly
I engaged to obtain vast information about the
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pods
,
also
its benefits,
subsequently
, I
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purchased
it from the electronic market. After using it, I
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think
it’s one of the best products that I have
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used
till
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now
as its features are unique.
Moreover
, the design of AirPods is
exceptionally
comfortable;
therefore
, they do not drop and fit into the ear
perfectly
,
in brief
, I am
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very
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pleased
to
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buy
this product,
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so
, I eliminated my listening problem with to
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buy
it, later on, I have never happened any problem since
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air
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IELTS essay Describe a thing that you bought and felt pleased about

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