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Describe a street market in your city Where is it , how often you go , what is it famous for

Describe a street market in your city Where is it, how often you go, what is it famous for Gw10Q
Well with the advancement of technology online shopping has become much popular. There are a plethora of sites from which one can buy things online. Moreover, one can also get a number of discount from these sites. Despite having these amenities on online sites there are a number of people who like to buy things from local market here I will elaborate about a street market which is located heart of my hometown. I always visit these for buying things which are required. Apart from this there are a number of shops one can buy clothes, utensils, stationary. Last Monday I bought a necklace from this market to give my friend on her birthday which was liked by everyone. consequently, there was a market in my hometown where I visit.
Well with the advancement of technology online shopping has become much popular. There are a plethora of sites from which one can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
things online.
Moreover
, one can
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a number of discount from these sites. Despite having these amenities on online sites there are a number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
things from local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
market
here I will elaborate about a street
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
market
which
is located
heart of my hometown. I always visit these for buying things which
are required
. Apart from this there are a number of shops one can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
clothes, utensils, stationary. Last Monday I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a necklace from this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
market
to give my friend on her birthday which
was liked
by everyone.
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consequently
, there was a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
market
in my hometown where I visit.
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IELTS essay Describe a street market in your city Where is it, how often you go, what is it famous for

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