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Describe a argument between two of your friends . When it was , what they argued and how solved it

Describe a argument between two of your friends. When it was, what they argued and how solved it BMy9m
Last month my friends a I made a plan to meet. We decided to visit at a restaurant which is located near my hometown. Moreover when I reached there both already arrived there and they enjoyed coffee moreover, when I took my chair and ordered one cup coffee taking start. The matter was about what is much important job satisfaction and high salary one of my friend her name is Harmsn said that high salary is much essential person should focus to earn much money instead of getting job satisfaction however other say person should stay happy rather than earing. I tried to understand them that both have equal importance.
Last month my friends
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a I
made a plan to
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meet
. We decided to visit at a restaurant which
is located
near my hometown.
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Moreover
when I reached there both already arrived
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there and
they enjoyed coffee
moreover
, when I took my chair and ordered one cup coffee taking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
. The matter was about what is much
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important
job satisfaction and high salary one of my friend her name is
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Harmsn
said that high salary is much essential person should focus to earn much money
instead
of getting job satisfaction
however
other say person should stay happy
rather
than
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earing
. I tried to understand them that both have equal importance.
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IELTS essay Describe a argument between two of your friends. When it was, what they argued and how solved it

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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