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Describe a situation when you did not have enough time for something. You should say: what the situation was when did it happen what you were trying to do and explain how did you handle the situation

Describe a situation when you did not have enough time for something. You should say: what the situation was when did it happen what you were trying to do and explain how did you handle the situation oxWlg
The hardest moment in my life that I didn't have time to survive was during my university selection test. Before the exam, my hand got injured because I fell off and I realized that the exam was started in 5 five minutes after that accident. So, I had to survive and need more energy to cross the answer because the test was a multiple choice. Because of that I believed that I couldn't make it and got accepted in that university so I just cross over the answer and pray to god.
The hardest moment in my life that I didn't have time to survive was during my university selection
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I fell off and I realized that the exam was
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in 5 five minutes after that accident.
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, I had to survive and need more energy to cross the answer
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the
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was a multiple choice.
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of that I believed that I couldn't
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it and
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accepted
in that university
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I
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cross over the answer and pray to god.
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IELTS essay Describe a situation when you did not have enough time for something. You should say: what the situation was when did it happen what you were trying to do and explain how did you handle the situation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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