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Describe a recent decision you had to make. How did you choose what you would do? How will this experience help you to make future decisions?

Describe a recent decision you had to make. How did you choose what you would do? How will this experience help you to make future decisions? VQoQJ
If I write about my recent decision which i got recently was my bachelors degree path. Beginnig of this I had clue about what to do as my degree. There were two option one is Business management and Accounting & finance. I was troubling with with a long time. Beacuse I had know firm idea about these two subjects. So I did reasearch in the internet and I asked about that in some experts in the business. So finally I choosed Accounting & finance is the most suitable degree which I need to do for better future with mt aspects and my talent. Because I am really good with mathematics and accounting is the major subject in the world globalization
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
I write about my recent decision which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
recently was my bachelors degree path.
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Beginnig
of this I had clue about what to do as my degree. There were two option one is Business management and Accounting & finance. I was troubling
Possible typo: you repeated a word
with with
a long time.
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Beacuse
I had
Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "known".
know
firm
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idea
about these two subjects.
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So
I did
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reasearch
The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the internet".
in the internet
and I asked about that in
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some
experts in the business.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
finally
I
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "chose", the past tense form of the verb 'choose'?
choosed
Accounting & finance is the most suitable degree which I need to do for better future with mt aspects and my talent.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
I am
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
with mathematics and accounting is the major subject in the world
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
globalization

IELTS essay Describe a recent decision you had to make. How did you choose what you would do? How will this experience help you to make future decisions?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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