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Describe a recent decision you had to make. How did you choose what you would do? How will this experience help you to make future decisions?

Describe a recent decision you had to make. How did you choose what you would do? How will this experience help you to make future decisions? VQoQJ

If I write about my recent decision which i got recently was my bachelors degree path. Beginnig of this I had clue about what to do as my degree. There were two option one is Business management and Accounting & finance. I was troubling with with a long time. Beacuse I had know firm idea about these two subjects. So I did reasearch in the internet and I asked about that in some experts in the business. So finally I choosed Accounting & finance is the most suitable degree which I need to do for better future with mt aspects and my talent. Because I am really good with mathematics and accounting is the major subject in the world globalization

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 I write about my recent decision which Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 recently was my bachelors degree path. Possible spelling mistake found.Beginning
Beginnig
 of this I had clue about what to do as my degree. There were two option one is Business management and Accounting & finance. I was troubling Possible typo: you repeated a wordwith
with with
 a long time. Possible spelling mistake found.Because
Beacuse
 I had Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "known".known
know
 firm This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 about these two subjects. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I did Possible spelling mistake found.research
reasearch
The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the internet".on the internet
in the internet
 and I asked about that in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 experts in the business. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
finally
 I Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "chose", the past tense form of the verb 'choose'?chosechoosechooseschooser
choosed
 Accounting & finance is the most suitable degree which I need to do for better future with mt aspects and my talent. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 I am really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 with mathematics and accounting is the major subject in the world Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphglobalization.globalization!globalization?globalization:globalization,globalization;
globalization