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Books are losing their importance as a source of information and entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?

Books are losing their importance as a source of information and entertainment. KG7yL
Paper-based books are getting rid of their own reputation as an origin of knowledge and amusement by internet. There is a tendency to get info and consume more quickly that is surpassing books although books still can be more reliable in terms of resource of data. On the one hand, technology is playing vital role, which led to reduce quality of information, in displacing of books. A number of people wants to exchange information with each other by the internet interactively that made an impact on considering of reading of books as an old fashion tradition. In this case, e-books have already been pivotal in sphere of knowledge which is readable everywhere and made us to be deprived of carrying of enormous books. That is why, although internet including a great deal of data, as main idea of reading of books still is available and much safer that is also lead to avoiding of environmental destruction. On the other hand, I believe, dislocation of paper-based books is not related end of the reading of book ages. For example, once upon a time, paper-based books may have been seen as a technological miracle but then it started to be less essential. Thus, every single technological improvement is a captive in same fate. Sendentary life style is no more suitable for us. People have to adopt their life to flow of technologic development in order to comprehend of conditions of world. In my opinion, it does not matter what sort of books is used to get info, it does matter to access accurate intellect by right info. Also, internet should be part of the reading of knowledge simultaneously with books. In conclusion, believe of dwindling of consequence of books might not be worrying as much as is considered. On the contrary, it can be related novel experiences of technology that depends on interest area of personality.
Paper-based
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books
are getting rid of their
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own
reputation as an origin of knowledge and amusement by internet. There is a tendency to
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get
info and consume more
quickly
that is
surpassing
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books
although
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books
still
can be more reliable in terms of resource of data.

On the one hand, technology is playing vital role, which led to
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reduce
quality of information, in displacing of
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books
. A number of
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people
wants to exchange information with each other by the internet
interactively
that made an impact on considering of
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reading
of
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books
as an
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old
fashion tradition.
In this case
, e-books have already been pivotal in sphere of knowledge which is readable everywhere and made us to
be deprived
of carrying of enormous
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books
.
That is
why, although internet including a great deal of data, as main
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idea
of
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reading
of
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books
still
is available and much safer
that is
also
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lead
to avoiding of environmental destruction.

On the other hand
, I believe, dislocation of paper-based
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books
is not related
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end
of the
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reading
of
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book
ages.
For example
, once upon a time, paper-based
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books
may have been
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seen
as a technological miracle
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but
then it
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started
to be less essential.
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, every single technological improvement is a captive in same fate.
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Sendentary
life style is no more suitable for us.
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People
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have to
adopt their life to flow of
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technologic
development in order to comprehend of conditions of world. In my opinion, it does not matter what sort of
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books
is
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used
to
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get
info, it does matter to access accurate intellect by right info.
Also
, internet should be part of the
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reading
of knowledge
simultaneously
with books.

In conclusion
, believe of dwindling of consequence of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
might not be worrying as much as
is considered
.
On the contrary
, it can
be related
novel experiences of technology that depends on interest area of personality.
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IELTS essay Books are losing their importance as a source of information and entertainment.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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