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Why do you think people waste food?

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Nowadays in many developed countries, food waste is a big problem in the economy. First of all, you need to think about the amount of food consumption by a person. There are many people around us who need food and it is better to give food waste, share it with whoever needs it and not throw it away. It is a big problem and every day the goverment fights the residents about this problem. The best way to stop a lot of food waste is to buy only what you need. Before going to the store, make a shopping list.
Nowadays in
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developed countries
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waste is a
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big
problem in the economy.
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think
about the amount of
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food
consumption by a person. There are
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many
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people
around us who
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need
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food
and it is better to give
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food
waste, share it with whoever
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needs
it and not throw it away.

It is a
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problem and every day the
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goverment
fights the residents about this problem. The best way to
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stop
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a lot of
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food
waste is to
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buy
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only
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Before
going to the store,
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make
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IELTS essay Why do you think people waste food?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
100 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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