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Describe a present which you very enjoyed receiving. What it was. Who gave it to you. What the occasion it was. Why you were so pleased.

Describe a present which you very enjoyed receiving. What it was. Who gave it to you. What the occasion it was. Why you were so pleased. k152

Even though there are lots of things that gave me happiness. I'm going to share with you about time when I was given a dog as a present. This dog cheered up my mood over than nine cloud. Those days my parents were considering that it would be the best present, provided that I promise to look after this dog myself. The dog was given me on New Year's Eve, so that it was as a magic time for me. It's often said that dogs are the best friends of human and this is a common fack. The primary reason why it gave me feeling deliriously happy was that I made a new friends who never leave me in the lurch. Nowadays I have been having my dog for a few years however he is my shoulder to cry on as well as the triger to level up, especially when he woke up me as early as it might be to take a stroll which helps me to keep in shape.

“Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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