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Describe a present that you were quite pleased to get

Describe a present that you were quite pleased to get LnE8

Although there were lots of items that gave me happiness, I'm going to share with you about time when I was given a dog as a present. This dog cheered up my mood as well as made me fell over the moon. those days my parents were considering that it would be the best present, they decided to obtain this dog, provided that I promise to look after this dog myself. the dog was given me on New Year's Eve, consequently it was as a magic time for me. It's frequently said that dogs are the best friends of human and this is a common fact. As a consequence the primary issue why it gave me feeling deliriously happy was that I made a new friend who never leave me in the lurch. Nowadays I have been having my dog for a few years however he is my shoulder to cry on as well as the trigger to level up, especially when he wakes me up as early as it might be to take a stroll which helps me to keep myself in fit.

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dog
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given
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dogs
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As a consequence the primary issue why it gave me feeling deliriously
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leave
 me in the lurch. Nowadays I have been having my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpuppypup
dog
 for a few years however
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 as the trigger to level up, especially
 when he wakes me up as early as it might be to take a stroll which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
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keep
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